Cover letter

Avalon Bednarcik

ENG151

DR. Steven Kapela

Oct. 19,2012

To whom it may concern,

            My group and I collaborated to work together and construct this brochure.  We found the most impactful literacy sponsorship in our lives to be Family. Even diving deeper into this topic, the aspects of family we found to effect sponsorship are the cultural, social, and environmental. Based on the limited space as you can see, we had to make it somewhat cluttered to fit all the nesissary information. We still didn’t have enough space to fit everything we needed to say still at this time It fine though, it’s a rough draft, it should be rough. This brochure may be somewhat confusing to read on line, without printing it out, but the flow works well with the set up of our arguments, data, and methods. Overall the majority of my group put in their part, and provided some input to make this whole project come together.

1.     Good use of research

2.     It’s So Ugly!

3.     Some text is hard to read

4.     Good flow

5.     Could use more visual texts

6.     Break up the texts

7.     Could make the style of the brochure more flashy and desirable to look at

8.     Text is some what confusing, but gets message across

9.     Grammatical errors

10.  Stayed focus on topic and very interesting